Prompt
Public transport vs roads
Governments should invest more in public transportation rather than building new roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Band 9 sample answer
Band 9 sample answer
I largely agree that governments should prioritise spending on public transportation over constructing new roads, because expanding road capacity often induces more car use, whereas mass transit can move people more efficiently and with fewer social costs. However, targeted road investment is still necessary in specific contexts.
In most cities, building additional roads is a short-lived solution. When driving becomes easier, more commuters choose cars, businesses increase deliveries by van, and new housing sprawls further from job centres. This “induced demand” quickly fills the extra lanes, returning congestion to previous levels while locking the public into higher fuel consumption, air pollution and traffic casualties. By contrast, investments in metro lines, bus rapid transit and integrated ticketing can shift large numbers of trips away from private vehicles. If services are frequent, reliable and affordable, public transport improves productivity by shortening predictable travel times and freeing up road space for those who genuinely need to drive.
Moreover, prioritising public transport supports wider policy goals. Electric rail and well-used buses reduce per-capita emissions, and accessible networks benefit low-income residents, older people and students who may not own cars. For example, dedicating lanes to buses and improving interchanges can dramatically increase capacity without the disruption and land acquisition required for urban motorways.
That said, governments should not abandon roads altogether. Rural regions, freight corridors and maintenance backlogs require continued funding, and some safety upgrades—such as junction redesigns—save lives regardless of mode.
Overall, public transportation deserves greater investment than new road building in most cases, while limited road spending should be reserved for maintenance and clearly justified bottlenecks.
Verified word count: 267
Why this answer works
explanation
The essay takes a clear position (“largely agree”) and sustains it throughout, while acknowledging an exception (targeted road spending). It explains mechanisms (induced demand), evaluates outcomes (congestion, emissions, equity), and uses a concrete example (bus lanes/interchanges). Paragraphing is logical with an overview-like stance in the introduction and a balanced conclusion.
what this question tests
This question tests your ability to take a clear position (agree/disagree/partly), compare policy options, and support your view with well-developed reasons and realistic examples. It also rewards cohesion (a logical structure) and precise vocabulary about transport, infrastructure and public spending.
Useful vocabulary and phrases
induced demand
Shows sophisticated understanding and precise terminology.
New lanes can trigger induced demand and congestion soon returns.
mass transit
Concise, academic collocation.
Mass transit moves far more people per metre of road space than cars.
integrated ticketing
Specific, real-world policy detail.
Integrated ticketing makes transfers between buses and trains seamless.
bus rapid transit (BRT)
Adds specificity without over-explaining.
BRT can deliver metro-like capacity at lower cost.
freight corridors
Demonstrates breadth beyond urban commuting.
Freight corridors need reliable road surfaces and safe junctions.
Common mistakes to avoid
- Writing an all-or-nothing answer without addressing situations where roads are necessary (e.g., maintenance, rural access, freight).
- Claiming public transport is always cheaper or easier without qualifying by context.
- Using vague language like “it is good/bad” instead of explaining mechanisms such as induced demand and network effects.
- Forgetting to conclude with your extent of agreement clearly restated.
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